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[ Greenz: Heyo this is an original story I am writing and unlike the last one I did (for those who saw it) I plan to consistently do this series to improve both my writing and translation skills. While I am not a masochist I do wish for as much criticism as you can possibly give me. I wish to improve my skills not just write for fun (although I am doing that as well) TLDR: Please give me feedback : ) ]
[My dear Prince, if you wish to hold my hand so that we can progress just one step closer to maybe one day d-dating… You must take over all the neighbouring kingdoms and unify the continent. Once that is done there is a chance my father shall approve of us dating in the distant future.]
When players first saw this dialogue (more accurately a monologue) they assumed the girl speaking would have been a high ranking noble of some kind. Maybe not a princess but at least a Margrave’s daughter but more likely a Duke’s daughter.
This wasn’t a common line in the game Green World though and that would be because this was one of the first AI-developed games that hit the market.
The idea being an always changing plotline, world, NPC’s and even battle mechanics like skills would always make the game feel fresh and hypothetically make it so that it could be played indefinitely.
Now in theory this sounded great for most players who would get a richer gaming experience that couldn’t be felt in open world games like Skyrim which were limited by human game developers.
…But what was not predicted was the nonsensical plot lines that were made from the AI.
The noble girl asking a prince to conquer an entire continent was a village girl: No traits, no skills, no wealth, no hidden powerhouse family, mediocre looks and not just a lack of wealth but downright drowning in debt due to an incompetent father that she idolized.
Thus led to a crazy plotline where a Prince of the most powerful Empire ever known to the continent of that world to massacre millions of lives through military conquest to earn the right to hold hands with a commoner girl with no distinguishable traits.
[Congratulations! Completion of your 43,767th run you have been rewarded 33,659 reincarnation points!]
“Ahhh, another good day of grinding, I managed to confirm the Cloning skills activation conditions. Although it shouldn’t have taken this long to do it…”
One man found himself playing this game for 15 years straight as he was invested in the combat system in the game.
“If I combine Cloning with Hopeless Talent couldn’t I theoretically have an infinite stat booster if one clone was in a Time Chamber?”
New skills, traits, weapons, physiques and even dabbling in creating heirs that would further expand the things he could find and log down in his excel spreadsheet. He was what one would call a nerd or an otaku for those of culture.
“How many points is that now?”
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“If it needs to load the points it should just be enough already… Let me reincarnate already I don’t even care what as! Start off as a slave that gets bought off by a Princess that will fall in love with me and then I will create an imperial harem that unifies the continent muahahaha!”
[Request received lacking points… Calculating…]
[Downgraded Reincarnation will be granted.]
[Welcome to Beta test: Green World Command.]
Please give me feedback : )